Script

Scene opens with extreme-close up of framed photo, showing young couple in love. (Peaceful love music)

[Introduce the male main character and his girlfriend.]

Cut to side-on close up of boy in the photo reading news on computer. (Peaceful love music)

Cut to POV shot of news article on screen, showing him as famous teenage detective. (Peaceful love music turns to lower and fast-paced music)

[Creating tension, and expectation of problem.]

He receives e-mail which causes him to look concerned. He then rings his girlfriend to see if she is okay. (Fast-paced music)

[We anticipate problems with his girlfriend. Audience begins to feel nervous.]

Receiving no reply, he runs out of the house. (Fast-paced music)

[Tension rising, exciting action, audience anxious for him and his girlfriend.]

Cut to e-mail which he had read, which included a frightened photo of his girlfriend, and issued a challenge for him to save her. (Fast-paced music goes faster and louder)

[Tension rising more and more, audience worries about his girlfriend]

He has to go to a Starbucks shop, and await further instructions. (Fast-paced music)

The mystery challenger is watching him through the window and laughing evilly to himself. (Fast-paced music goes faster)

[Mystery challenger is still a mystery because we couldn’t see his face clearly. Audience starts to wonder who he is.]

Cut to girlfriend looking terrified in dark place, her dark black eyes dilated with fear. (Fast-paced music is going faster and faster)

[Bring audience into his girlfriend’s feeling—hopeless and scared.]

Following the clues to the first puzzle, our hero meets a girl just like her, only with green eyes. (Fast-paced music back to peaceful love music)

[Telling audience the only difference between this girl and his girlfriend is the eye colour.]

She is a computer genius, and offers to identify where the e-mail come from. (Peaceful love music)

[Where does she come from and why does she help him? Audience wants to know more.]

As she works on the computer to decipher the origin of the message, we focus on a close up of her concentrating green eyes. (Peaceful love music turns to fast-paced music)

[A hint foreshadowing later developments in this story.]

Suddenly the eye colour changes to black, and we zoom out to see his girlfriend tied up in a miserably dark place. There is blood on her face. (Fast-paced music)

[Make sure the audience gets the eye colour message again.]

Cut to evil challenger licking blood from the knife.（Fast-paced music goes faster）

[Violent scene makes audience feel repelled.]

Boyfriend receives phone call. (All music suddenly disappears, we only can hear the phone ringing on soundtrack)

[Suddenly loud phone call makes audience very alarmed.]

CHALLENGER:” Time’s up!” (No music, conversation only)

DETECTIVE:” Wait! Where are you?” (No music, conversation only)

CHALLENGER:”Behind you. (Cut to high angle POV shot from villain’s point of view, of gun to back of detective’s head.) Game over!” (No music, conversation only)

[This make audience feels like they are the villain standing there, about to shoot the hero.]

Extreme close up of very familiar green eyes which crease into a smile. (No music or soundtrack at all)

[Is this a conspiracy? Audience feels curious about green-eyed girl, is she…]

Black screen and white font--Coming Soon. (Fast-paced music again)

Introduction

The story start of a photo frame, there is a couple in this photo. A teenager boy is sitting in front of his computer and reading news, which is the same boy in the photo. The internet new tells us that this teenager boy is a famous teenage detective.

Then the story begins, one e-mail came through, detective opened it and soon found out that his girlfriend has kidnap by a mystery challenger who wants to beat him. The challenger claimed to play a game with the detective and gave him the first puzzle.

Detective tried to contact his girlfriend and we can see his girlfriend’s photo on his phone, the same girl in the photo frame. Of course no one answer the phone, so he runs out, and we could see the first puzzle from the e-mail which is the coffee shop.

A man is keeping watching on the detective in the coffee shop and we could only see the man’s evil smile. The kidnapper got the patch off the girl’s face, she has beautiful black eyes.

The detective is walking in school and suddenly he saw his girlfriend. He hugged her but then he realizes this girl has green eyes; she just has a similar face like his girlfriend. The green eyes girl is a computer genius and she helps the detective to find who the secret challenger is. At the same time, the detective’s girlfriend is still in a mess room.

Someone is licking a knife that has blood on it. The detective got the final call, and the real boss told him: “TIME’S UP!” A pistol aims to the detective’s hindbrain, and we can see the person who holds the pistol has green eyes.